People now think that spending a lot of money is a waste of money. But others believe that these parties are important to the individuals and society.
Discuss both views and give your own opinions.
While the social and economic developments are significantly achieved, people get paid much more than ever before. As a result, they would like to spend a lot of money on their wedding or birthday ceremonies. What can we think about such a social phenomena?
Opponents claim that it is explicitly to not only squander money, but these expensive events would also give rise to negative impact on the community. As a developing country, we still need to rely on a kind of cost-effective lifestyle. In addition, these ceremonies would adversely affect the others in society.
However, advocates who are in favour of these parties maintain an opposite notion that people have no right to argue against it. Furthermore, it could be of great importance to both the individuals and society. To illustrate this, they take communication between people as an example. It is self-evident that inviting people getting together would provide them with a rare chance to talk with each other, which now is difficult for people in such a rapidly changing world.
In summary, it is not effortless to classify which kind of these parties people would be better to hold. In my opinion, keeping freedom and democracy is the most important. If you are wealthy enough, nobody has the right to say anything on your wedding or birthday parties.
只想起来这么多,PARA2好象还有两句论证句,与PARA3差不多长,实在想不起来了,总字数大约超过250字了。我错在TASK1花多时间了,写了快200字(20分钟)。
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