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雅思写作高分范文:老人与疗养院

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2011-04-28 17:23

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  下面是一篇关于老人的雅思写作高分范文,这篇雅思写作范文的主要内容是讨论关于老人是应该待在家里还是应该去疗养院。这是一个现代社会不得不考虑的问题,大家可以用自己的经历或是想法作为论点。

  You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

  Should old people stay at home or be placed in nursing homes?

  You should write at least 250 words. You should use your own ideas of knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

  Parents have devoted all their lives and energy to their children and when they are old, it is time for their children to repay their care and love. Therefore, it seems that it should be the children’s responsibility to take good care of their parents in their later years. However, I believe that a better way of ensuring that aged parents lead a happy and healthy life is to put them in nursing homes.

  Living in nursing homes, they have more opportunities to communicate with their peers. Keeping each other’s company, they don’t feel lonely and can do a great deal of things together, such as morning exercise, playing games, and exchanging memories and stories from their past. On the other hand, if they live at home, they are often left alone when their children and grandchildren are away working or studying.

  In such retirement homes, aging people can receive intensive medical care from professional doctors. Besides, they can receive a proper diet prepared by dieticians to meet their individual requirements. This is especially good for those old people in poor health. Moreover, they could have regular medical check-ups so that any disease could be diagnosed in its early stage. What is the most beneficial is that if any disease strikes them, medical services are immediately available.

  Indeed, there are also benefits for children’s work and study when nursing homes take over the task of caring for the elderly. Children, free from care, can devote themselves to work or study and achieve more success.

  Since nursing homes benefits seniors and other family members so much, I believe that old people should be sent to nursing homes. (276 words)

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