雅思考试写作范文（2015年2月28日）

首段：背景介绍

It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school. The trend is not restricted to rich students who have the money to travel, but is also evident among poorer students who choose to work and become economically independent for a period of time.

二段：对比反证，谈及间隔年的利好

The reasons for this trend may involve the recognition that a young adult who passes directly from school to university is rather restricted in terms of general knowledge and experience of the world. By contrast, those who have spent some time earning a living or traveling to other places, have a broader view of life and better personal resources to draw on. They tend to be more independent, which is very important factor in academic study and research, as well as giving them an advantage in terms of coping with the challenges of student life.

解析：draw on v利用

解析：in terms of 在……方面

三段：让步段 + 反驳段

However, there are certainly dangers in taking time off at the important age. Young adults may end up never returning to their studies or finding it difficult to re-adapt to an academic environment. They may think that it is better to continue in a particular job or to do something completely different from a university course. But overall, I think this is less likely today, when academic qualifications are essential for getting a reasonable career.

解析：are essential for getting a reasonable career 对于找到一份好工作很重要

尾段：我的立场：

My view is that young people should be encouraged to broaden their horizons. That is the best way for them to get a clear perspective of what they are hoping to do with their lives. Students with such a perspective are usually the most effective and motivated ones and taking a year off may be the best way to gain this.

解析：broaden their horizons. v 拓宽视野

解析：get a clear perspective of v对于……有清晰认知