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  雅思写作除了词汇量要达到以外,还有很多提分点的哦。出国留学网为雅思栏目大家带来雅思小作文线图范文及分析,希望对大家备考雅思有所帮助!

  第一类:线图

  model answer

  1.The graph illustrates changes in the amounts of beef, lamb, chicken and fish consumed in a particular European country between 1979 and 2004.

  2.In 1979 beef was by far the most popular of these foods, with about 225 grams consumed per person per week. Lamb and chicken were eaten in similar quantities (around 150 grams), while much less fish was consumed (just over 50 grams).

  3.However, during this 25-year period the consumption of beef and lamb fell dramatically to approximately 100 grams and 55 grams respectively. The consumption of fish also declined, but much less significantly to just below 50 grams, so although it remained the least popular food, consumption levels were the most stable.

  4.The consumption of chicken, on the other hand, showed an upward trend, overtaking that of lamb in 1980 and that of beef in 1989. By 2004 it had soared to almost 250 grams per person per week.

  5.Overall, the graph shows how the consumption of chicken increased dramatically while the popularity of these other foods decreased over the period.

  分析:

  第一段

  1 The graph illustrates changes in the amounts of beef, lamb, chicken and fish consumed in a particular European country between 1979 and 2004.

  The graph illustrates changes 描述变化的常用句式。in the amounts of在---数量上。Consumed是过去分词作后置定语,表示“被消费”。相当于which were consumed的定语从句。

  第二段:

  1 In 1979 beef was by far the most popular of these foods, with about 225 grams consumed per person per week.

  By far是在那时,是常用的时间状语;the most popular 最高级,of后面加“总体”,最高级的整体。With后面加数字;consumed是过去分词做后置定语,相当于which were consumed。

  2 Lamb and chicken were eaten in similar quantities (around 150 grams), while much less fish was consumed (just over 50 grams).

  In similar quantities是“相似的数量”的意思,括弧里面加入具体的数字,是常用的数据引出方式。Much less是“更少”,much修饰比较级less;(just over 50 grams)同样也是用括号引出数据。

  第三段:

  1 However, during this 25-year period the consumption of beef and lamb fell dramatically to approximately 100 grams and 55 grams respectively.

  However 连接前后两个段落,两个数据。第二段属于静止描述起始点的数值,接下来描述以后的数据变化,就可以用however来连接。During this 25-year period 在这25年的阶段里。Respectively是副词“分别地”的意思,通常用于修饰两个数据,分别是某两个数字。

  2 The consumption of fish also declined, but much less significantly to just below 50 grams

  Also--- but,描述相同的趋势但不同的变化程度。Less significantly是与之前的变化相比较得出的结论,前面也是“巨大”,但这个变化速度不如之前“巨大”。

  第四段:

  1 The consumption of chicken, on the other hand, showed an upward trend, overtaking that of lamb in 1980 and that of beef in 1989.

  On the other hand另一方面。Show an upward trend,“展示了一个上升的趋势”,属于固定表达。Overtaking 是doing现在分词作伴随状语的用法,它是定语从句变化而来,相当于which overtakes,如果动词和关系代词的关系是主动,则把动词改成doing即可。That of beef的that相当于consumption,因为与前面短语格式一模一样,所以为避免重复,用that代替。

  第五段:

  1 Overall, the graph shows how the consumption of chicken increased dramatically while the popularity of these other foods decreased over the period.

  Overall是“总体来说”的意思,通常是小作文的最后总阶段用词。the graph shows how 改图展示了如何---,while连接两个趋势。这个重复描述图形的整体变化趋势的句子是常用的总阶段写法。

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