对于雅思写作而言,想要提高写作水平,那么就需要对于雅思写作的常见误区有了解,那么下面就和出国留学网的小编来看看雅思写作误区:同义替换。
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话题:Some people believe that older generation’s traditional ideas are not the right way to live, think and behave in modern society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(2008/01/19)
Past ideas are precious treasures of human beings. Although not every traditional idea can be used in modern community, many of them still have their reference value for the development of our society. In other words, if we follow these ideas in the properly on the basis of current situation, they still could pave the right way for us to think and live.
重点看past,community,还有pave the right way。较准确的表达可以是traditional, society, be a good guidance。
还有:It is the heritage of traditional opinions that enables us to be frugal for living materials, natural and social resources. 这句话的说理用上了heritage, enable,其实本身都没有问题,但是放在这,显得突兀。“传统观点”的遗产,使我们能够变得节约。一部分原因是作者把traditional ideas换成了traditional opinions,这其实不是无缝的同义替换。较好的表达可以是:Traditional ideas teach us to be frugal and always save for the future.
必须要指出很多烤鸭写作的一个重要误区:替换强迫症。或许你有在哪个辅导书里看到过说雅思小作文要会替换题设中的一些词汇。但是,如果本身读题时,就不能很精准的解读题目,再加上你对某些关键词汇的使用语域不清,导致你开篇导入话题时似乎就走在了偏题的路上了。
雅思大作文的导入,一定要简洁,明了,让人一眼看到你的观点并且让人知道你是明白话题的全部内容的。
在同义词替换和照搬原词间,有时后者更好。
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