如何提高雅思写作9分范文与考生建议

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2005/5/28大连考试. 听力8.5,阅读8.5,口语8,写作9

今天知道成绩,很兴奋.基本发挥正常.本人英文专业.今年3月份开始在大连向邱林老师学习古希腊神话美学赏析,1000多页英文原版教材.写了很多很多文艺评论.考前只上了10天邱林老师的IELTS WRITING班.

强烈建议没必要参加雅思培训班(SORRY DR QIU),雅思的高分是长期学习的结果.

强烈建议大家学习古希腊神话( THE CLASSSICAL MYTHOLOGY)第7版,对写作帮助太大了.

附本次考试我的作文:

WRITING:

There is no doubt that helping students find a job is one of the primary functions of university education, but universities do exist for other purposes such as improving students’ analytical skills and raising students’ moral standards.

A university education can be seen as a process of improving students’ analytical thinking. The variety of courses offered at university inspires students in various ways, therefore improving their analytical ability. For example, science courses such as math and biology help students develop a rational way of thinking whereas arts courses such as literature 123ve to let students ponder over issues from a logical, multi- dimensional perspective; and courses in social sciences force students to recognize the ideas that have been traditionally assumed to be acceptable and unproblematic. With the development of these types of analytical thinking, graduates can face future challenges with more confidence and enthusiasm.

Also, university education is expected to improve students’ moral standards. This is rooted in universities’ belief that students’ awar123ss of responsibility towards their community and their country is of high importance. In this ever-deg123rating society and civilization, students are encouraged actively participate in improving the local community. A university that provides care and facilities for physically disadvantaged students may inspire the graduates to better handle situations in the future where they may have to interact with the disabled community. A successful university education is supposed to produce morally sound graduates, therefore increasing their employability.

In conclusion, university education not only helps students locate a decent job but will also develop other qualities such as enhancing their analytical skills and cultivating their hunger and spirit for life.