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对于大多数国内雅思考生而言,5-6分是比较容易取得的分数。但是有部分同学连续考两次雅思,作文均得5分。他们百思不得其解:他们掌握了写作的技巧,也有充分的论点论据,为什么6分这么难?其实他们的症结在于语言基础太不扎实,出现大量语言错误,通篇充斥着句子结构和用词错误,甚至于第一段就出现“低级”语言错误十几处,让考官目不忍睹。在过去六年里,笔者批改了培训学员的近十万篇习作,对考生常见问题进行了归纳整理,及时指出他们的错误,并从中英语言差异的角度,详细分析问题出现的深层次成因,从而达到治标兼治本的效果。

下面的改错练习,希望考生认真分析其错误之处并找出其成因,不要停留在改错的表层水平,应该挖掘其深层次的成因,以避免屡次犯同样的“低级”错误。

1. The invention of computers makes people live more comfortable and convenient.

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2. Don’t put hand in pocket.

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3. Many traffic accidents occurred is the result of careless.

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4. Last night was too cold.

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5. By comparison, nuclear energy has some distinctive advantages, such as it is very clean and cheap.

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6. Some people claim that fast food will instead of traditional food.

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7. Despite he is very diligent at study, he stills cannot pass the IELTS test.

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8. I finished homework and went out of dormitory for a drink.

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9. Though the Internet has many benefits, but it also has some drawbacks.



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10. If you are convenient, please give me a hand.

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11. In the past, the price of milk was so expensive that few people could hardly afford it.

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12. I forgot my watch at home.

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13. Smoking is harmful to your body.

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14. Under his help, we past the IELTS test.

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15. The two types of designs exist difference.

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16. The true fact is he never offers help to others.

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17. There are many people plan to study abroad.

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18. Keep pets are very popular among people live in big city.

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19. If let alone at home, many old people are very dangerous.

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20. The society should pay more attention to the problems of education, poverty and disease, however, they seldom do so.

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21. Today is very hot, I stay home.

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22. When talking to the interviewer, my heart was beating very fast.

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23. He gave the rose to the lovely lady that he had bought for his wife.

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24. Comparing with the performance of Linda, Kent’s performance is far from perfect.

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25. The big noise makes me can’t sleep well.

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26. My suggestion is more attention should be attached to the issue of youth drug abuse.

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27. The price of milk is more expensive than rice.

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28. The amount of bikes will decline in ten years.

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29. Smoking is harmful to one’s body. On the one hand, it can cause lung cancer. On the other hand, it can increase the chances of having a miscarriage if a woman is pregnant.

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30. The reason why people choose to live in cities is because the city life is more convenient and colorful.

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31. People think develop space research will spend a huge number of money.

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32. Now people go abroad becomes very easy.

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33. Computer is a useful tool for student learn English.

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34. Raising pets are good for old people and child.

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35. Pet like dog and cat accompany them.

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36. Keep pet in big city is not allowed.

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37. There are many medical reports reveal that keeping pet can prevent heart disease and help patient to feel comfortably.

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38. Discuss about/complain about/enter into the room/contact with/

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39. Keep a pet would affect familial relationship.

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40. It arises a public debate as to whether we humans should carry out experiments on animals.

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41. Pursuit of fashion spends much money and waste much time.

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42. However, others people suggest that college students do the part-time job is quite beneficial.

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43. Young people live and study by themselves is of great significance to their future career.

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44. On the whole, computer games have both advantages and disadvantages. But fairly speaking, everyone has to admit that it’s disadvantages far overweight it’s advantages.

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45. I find myself difficult to work and study there due to my roommate’s inconsiderate behavior.

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46. I am very difficult to write essays in English.

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47. When one is over 70 years old, he is very dangerous if left alone at home.

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48. I hope this letter would draw your attention and look into the case.

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49. Last year saw a rapidly raise in the volume of output.

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50. A small thief entered into my room and my room was stolen last night.

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51. I would like a single room to live and study.

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52. I am sorry for my abrupt departure that day, for I received a telephone that day asking me to return back home immediately.

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53. I and my sister like pets very much. Therefore we strongly against the ban on pet-raising.

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54. They maybe very busy so that they can not spare some time for their aged parents.

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55. The curve rose upward sharply in the past few days.

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56. After three days’ meeting, we drew a final conclusion that Tom is a dishonest man.

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