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  这类考题曾经出现在,2005-10-29北京、长沙。鸟鲁木齐 、大连、天津、西安、上海、南京、杭州、成都、昆明、广州、厦门、海口,下面来让我们看一下“雅思议论文写作范文:65岁退休”。

  雅思写作真题还原

  You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

  Should the seniors retire art 65 years old? Some are for it, but others are against it Discuss both of them and give your opinion.

  Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

  Write at least 250 words.

  题源分析

  该话题要求讨论65岁退休的可行性。一方同意,另一方持反对观点。要求分析这两个方面观点的理由,举例论证,最后点出自己的观点并阐明自己的论据。注意论述的思路,做到条理清楚,简洁易懂。

  推荐格式是:

  第一段:描述主题,点明争论焦点:应不应该在65岁时退休? …

  第二段:赞成65岁退休的理由:它缓解了因人口老龄化带来的人才断层问题,减轻了子女的养老压力。

  第三段:反对65岁退休的理由:延长退休年龄会加重社会就业压力,且体力和脑力会随着年龄增加而有所衰退。

  第四段:表述自己的观点:设一个弹性规定,根据各人各国的特殊情况而区别对待。

  其他参考观点:

  赞成的理由:

  1.充分发挥老年人的人力资源优势。

  2.降低企业雇用中高龄劳工的工本。

  3.减轻越来越大的基本养老保险基金的支付压力。

  反对的理由:

  1.会导致老人延后获得退休金给付甚至无法获得退休金给付。

  2.不利于青年人才的成长。

  3.延长退休年龄并不能从根本上解决国家养老金和人口老龄化的问题。4.波及高素质人才培养和高校的发展战略。

  5.许多人希望早点退休后好好享受生活,颐养天年。

  雅思写作范文

  When to retire? This is a hot topic these days. When the present retiring age is 60 years old for man and 55 for woman in many countries, retiring at 65 means prolonged people's retirement age. It seems natural for people to work longer, as the life expectancy increased. However, there are two completely different ideas on this issue. Some agrees to it, while others violently oppose it. Let's see together what their reasons are.

  Those who agree hold the statement that retiring at 65 can relive the problem of talent chasm between seniors and youth greatly Moreover, it helps reduce young people's stress of supporting their parents. Take China mainland for example, under the one-child policy, every family has only one child, so when he and she get married, the two have to take care of four seniors. On this point we can say that retiring at 65 shares much of young people's financial burdens.

  But others argue that this prolonged retirement exacerbates the existing fierce job market, making it harder for those lay-offs, jobless and young graduates to get a job. This is especially serious in China, as there is always a surplus in labor force. What's more, as people grow older, their physical health and spiritual conditions are on the wane which will affect their performance too much to continue working.

  In summary, I think we can set an elastic retirement age range, which permits the individual to choose when exactly to retire on the basis of their health condition and will. In this way, we can maximize the brains of the senior while reduce the risk and complains to the minimum.

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