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  下面是一篇关于成功的雅思写作7分范文,这篇雅思写作范文的主要内容是有人认为在大学里学习是通向成功的职场的最佳途径,但是其他人认为毕业后直接找工作才是最佳途径。讨论这两种观点,并给出你的观点。

  Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.

  Discuss both views and give your opinion.

  When they finish school, teenagers face the dilemma of whether to get a job or continue their education. While there are some benefits to getting a job straight after school, I would argue that it is better to go to college or university.

  The option to start work straight after school is attractive for several reasons. Many young people want to start earning money as soon as possible. In this way, they can become independent, and they will be able to afford their own house or start a family. In terms of their career, young people who decide to find work, rather than continue their studies, may progress more quickly. They will have the chance to gain real experience and learn practical skills related to their chosen profession. This may lead to promotions and a successful career.

  On the other hand, I believe that it is more beneficial for students to continue their studies. Firstly, academic qualifications are required in many professions. For example, it is impossible to become a doctor, teacher or lawyer without having the relevant degree. As a result, university graduates have access to more and better job opportunities, and they tend to earn higher salaries than those with fewer qualifications. Secondly, the job market is becoming increasingly competitive, and sometimes there are hundreds of applicants for one position in a company. Young people who do not have qualifications from a university or college will not be able to compete.

  For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that students are more likely to be successful in their careers if they continue their studies beyond school level.

  以上就是这篇雅思写作7分范文的全部内容,字数足够。这篇雅思写作范文所占的观点是应该在大学继续学习,但是对另外的观点也做了相应的论述,所用的篇章结构的语法结构都值得大家借鉴。

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