留学社区

目录

2019雅思考试作文书写精简指南

字典 |

2019-03-08 17:57

|

【 liuxue86.com - 雅思作文 】

  对于雅思写作来说,学会雅思写作的技巧是非常重要的,接下来就和出国留学网来看看2019雅思考试作文书写精简指南。

  雅思写作精简建议一:避免空洞的单词和词组

  1.一些空洞的单词或词组根本不能为句子带来任何相关或重要的信息,完全可以删掉。

  比如:When all things are considered, young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents, in my opinion.

  这句话当中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都显得多余。完全可以去掉。改为:

  Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.

image.png

  2.有些空洞和繁琐的表达方式可以进行替换。

  例如:Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.

  “due to the fact that”就是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的例子,可以替换,简化为下面的表达方式:

  Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have now.

  雅思写作精简建议二:避免重复

  1.尽量避免重复使用同样的词汇。或者有的时候虽然词汇没有重复,但意思却有重复。这时候可以做一些简化的工作。

  例如下面这个例子:The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size.

  large对一个farm来说就是size方面的large,所以in size可以去掉,改为:

  The farm my grandfather grew up on was large.

  更简洁的表达方式为:

  My grandfather grew up on a large farm.

  2.有时一个词组可以用一个更简单的单词来替换。

  例如:My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents' farm.

  这里的over and over again就可以改为repeatedly,显得更为简洁:

  My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents' farm.

  雅思写作精简建议三:选择最恰当的语法结构

  选择合适的语法结构可以使句子意思的表达更为精确和简练。虽然语法的多样性也很重要,但选择最恰当的语法结构仍然是更为重要的考虑因素。以下原则是在考虑选择何种语法结构时可以参考的原则:

  1.一个句子的主语和谓语动词应该能够反映句子中最重要的意思。

  例如:The situation that resulted in my grandfather's not being able to study engineering was that his father needed help on the farm.

  从意思上来分析,上面这句话需要表达的重要的概念是“grandfather's not being able to study”,而在表达这个概念时,原句用的主语是situation,谓语动词是was,不能强调需要表达的重点概念,可以改为下面这句话:

  My grandfather couldn't study engineering because his father needed help on the farm.

  2.避免频繁使用“there be”结构。

  例如下面的句子:There were 25 cows on the farm that my grandfather had to milk every day. It was hard work for my grandfather.

  可以改为:

  My grandfather worked hard. He had to milk 25 cows on the farm every day.

  更简洁的句式为:

  My grandfather worked hard milking 25 cows daily.

  3.把从句改为短语或单词。

  例如:Dairy cows were raised on the farm,which was located100 kilometers from the nearest university and was in an areathat was remote.

  简介的表达方式为:

  The dairy farm was located in a remotearea, 100 kilometers to the nearest university.

  4.仅在需要强调宾语而不是主语的时候,才使用被动语态。

  例如:In the fall, not only did the cows haveto be milked, but also the hay was mowed and stacked by my grandfather'sfamily.

  本句不够简洁的原因是本句的重心应该是“忙碌的家庭-mygrandfather's family”,而使用了被动语态後,彷佛重心变成了cows和hay。下面的表达方式是主动语态,相对来说更简洁一些:

  In the fall, my grandfather's family notonly milked the cow but also mowed and stacked the hay.

  5.用更为精确的一个动词来代替动词短语。

  例如:My grandfather didn't have time tostand around doing nothing with his school friends.

  Stand around doing nothing其实可以用一个动词来表达,即loiter:

  My grandfather didn't have time toloiter with his school friends.

  6.有时两句话的信息经过组合完全可以用一句话来简练地表达。

  例如:Profits from the farm were not times they were too small to meet the expenses of running a farm. They werenot sufficient to pay for a university degree.

  两句话的信息可以合并为下面这句更为简洁的句子:

  Profits from the farm were sometimes toosmall to meet operational expenses, let alone pay for a university degree.

  推荐阅读:

  雅思自学备考指南

  怎样写好雅思大作文

  雅思词汇短期突破攻略

  想了解更多雅思作文网的资讯,请访问: 雅思作文

本文来源:https://ielts.liuxue86.com/i/3885679.html
延伸阅读
雅思大作文备考,主要是掌握写作的技巧和策略,针对性的弥补自己的写作短板,这样才能有效的提升成绩,那么接下来就和出国留学网的小编来看看怎样写好雅思大作文?雅思大作文写作一共有两种类型
2019-02-20
准备雅思的作文,有哪些准备的着重点呢?这是不少留学生都会关注的问题,那么接下来就跟着出国留学网一起来看看2018年11月17日雅思作文考试真题及答案。TASK1图形为三线图,分析1
2018-11-22
备考雅思写作需要了解哪些?这是很多同学在备课它是写作的时候需要了解到的,那么接下来就和出国留学网一起来看看吧!第一、耳观八方所谓“耳观八方”,便是要多听。多听并不是漫无目的地听,而
2018-07-19
对于雅思写作来说,了解自己的雅思写作哪些地方扣分比较多对于自己的雅思写作提升是非常有帮助的,那么接下来就和出国留学网一起来看看2018年雅思写作有哪些容易扣分的地方?一、雅思写作单
2018-07-19
分词结构在英语中是应用得比较广的一种语法,那么接下来就和出国留学网一起来看看雅思写作分词结构解析。示例·Livingwithoutanaimislikesailingwithout
2018-07-19
“2017雅思考试作文经验指导与分享”由出国留学网雅思考试栏目为您提供,考试时间越来越接近,童鞋们赶快抓紧时间复习吧!一个中心:以完成任务为中心。题目中所有
2017-03-16
“雅思考试作文完美开头参考与经验分享”由出国留学网雅思考试栏目为您提供,考试时间越来越接近,童鞋们赶快抓紧时间复习吧!(1)抛弃冗长模板"使用模板
2017-03-16
为了帮助考生解雅思作文考试的疑问,出国留学网雅思栏目小编整理了相关的资料,希望可以帮助考生度过考试的难关,下面是小编搜集的雅思写作范文的相关资讯,更多信息请浏览雅思考试栏目!雅思考
2017-08-30
如今的雅思考试作文越来越没有套路可循了,要想哪搞的,就必须要另辟蹊径。今天就跟着出国留学网的小编一起来看看雅思考试高分技巧分享如何拿高分?其实人们对于“妖怪”形象的认识与我们对于“
2018-10-23
雅思考试已经临近,为了帮助考生们顺利通过考试。出国留学网小编整理了雅思作文的一些范文,和出国留学网一起来看看吧!欢迎阅读。雅思写作范文:年轻人压力大认真研读一定的雅思考试写作范文及
2017-08-22