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每次见到"囊中羞涩"的学生,尤其是高中生写作文时,他们总是憋得满脸通红却倒
不出几滴"洋墨水",我总是告诉他们,用简单的expressions来表达你们的ideas。他们却抱怨没有现成简单的范文可参考。现在我用他们的"囊中之物"--高中单词量写出
七分的Version120,这是被认为雅思最难的作文之一。
------广州仲恺雅思培训中心专职写作老师赖劲松。

Version 120 What are the purposes of the places such as museums, and how should they be funded?

----------------------Discussion-----285words in total------------------

Introduction (42 words)
It is well known that a museum is a building to display a collection of scientific,
historical,cultural or natural objects. Undoubtedly museums can have many purposes
in the city; I would like to mention two of them as following.

Body1 (68 words)
Visiting museums can give you much information. (topic sentence) If you visit a museum,
you may better understand a subject which you are studying, because you can see some
objects which cannot be seen on books. For example, after visiting a scientific museum,
you may be able to describe a spaceship in a wider way and say something very specific.
I believe that your classmates would admire you a lot.

Body2 ( 66words)
Also, visiting museums can develop one's love to his or her country (topic sentence) In
China,schools often organize trips to some historical museums. When the students learn
that many years ago, China was defeated and foreign soldiers robbed treasure and killed
a large number of Chinese who were not in the army, soon they will be angry with the
enemies and show deep love to the nation, hoping China to be strong in the world.

Body3 ( 70words)
Now that museums can play important part in the city, they should be funded. I suggest
that the museums should be planned as tourist attractions. They can be opened to the
public to collect entrance tickets. More visitors, more funds can be gained. If the
Government provides some rules that all students and government staff in the city ought
to visit museums regularly, a large sum of funds can be made.

Conclusion (39 words)
In conclusion, museums should become important part of our daily lives and the Government should encourage more people to visit museums. If more people come to visit museums, local culture can be more developed and museums can be better run.

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